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 English as a Second Language (ESL) Services
I can help make all of your English communications SPARKLE!
In today's competitive world marketplace, it's more important than ever
to have every piece of written communication demonstrate a firm command
of the English language.
That doesn't mean the words are simply written in English. It
means they're written in concise, technically perfect English that
leaves no doubt about your commitment to clarity and precision. It also
demonstrates your commitment to putting forth a maximum effort to
present a professional image to the world. That's where I can help.
Here's an example of an ESL revision I did recently for a
Chinese company in response to a customer inquiry.
The Original
Thanks
for your enquire. Because we have many styles and price is kind of
different,difficult for me to send what you want. However,just click
the following direct link of our quitars,you will see pictures and
price. In addtion, have a look at our products and select what you
like,then i can send you our pictures that can be displayed on website
in order to supply you convenience. You will get some free products
from us as gift sometimes. Have a consideration,please. Looking forward
to your kind response.
My Revision
Thank
you for your inquiry, but since we offer so many styles, it's difficult
to know exactly which guitar you're interested in. However, if you'll
visit our website, you'll find links to our entire line of
instruments, including pictures and price information. If you'd
like more detailed information on any particular model, we'll be happy
to send pictures of that guitar for display on your
website. You'll also receive free products from us as gifts from time
to time. We hope you'll consider our offer and look forward to
your response. |
As you can see, the revised
text dramatically improved the company's chances of receiving a
favorable response. Perfect, concise, persuasive English can make a
huge impact and can provide your company with a tremendous advantage in
the modern world's increasingly competitive marketplace.
The need for perfect English isn't just for businesses!
It's not just businesses that need to communicate in concise English. I've also worked with a number college students from around the world to revise term papers and essays. Since I work fulltime, I can generally have a relatively short piece of ESL work back to you within 24 HOURS.
I've also revised more than a dozen book-length manuscripts for ESL
authors and the results have been remarkable.
If English isn't your native language, drop me a line, describe your project goals, and I'll help turn them into reality!
Send details of your next project for a free quote.
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