Gary Anderson's ABC Iowa ESL Services

English as a Second Language (ESL) Services

I can help make your English communications SPARKLE!

In today's competitive world marketplace, it's more important than ever to have every piece of written communication demonstrate a firm command of the English language. That doesn't mean that the words are simply written in English. It means they're written in concise, technically perfect English that leaves no doubt about your commitment to clarity and precision. It also demonstrates your commitment to putting forth a maximum effort to present a professional image to the world. That's where I can help.

Here's an example from a Chinese company's response to a customer inquity.

The Original

Thanks for your enquire. Because we have many styles and price is kind of different,difficult for me to send what you want. However,just click the following direct link of our quitars,you will see pictures and price. In addtion, have a look at our products and select what you like,then i can send you our pictures that can be displayed on website in order to supply you convenience. You will get some free products from us as gift sometimes. Have a consideration,please. Looking forward to your kind response.

My Revision

Thank you for your inquiry, but since we offer so many styles, it's difficult to know exactly which style you're interested in. However, if you'll visit our website, you'll find a links to our entire line of guitars, including pictures and price information. If you'd like more detailed information on any particular model, I'll be happy to send pictures of that guitar for display on your website. You'll also receive free products from us as gifts from time to time. I hope you'll consider our offer, and I look forward to your response.

The revised text dramatically improved the impact upon the potential client and greatly increased the company's chances of receiving a favorable response. Perfect, concise, persuasive English makes a huge impact and can provide a company with a tremendous advantage in the modern world's increasingly competitive marketplace.

The need for perfect English isn't just for businesses, however.

It's not just businesses that need to communicate in concise English. I've also worked with college students to revise term papers and essays. Since I work fulltime, I can generally have a relatively short piece of ESL writing back to you within 24 HOURS.

I've also done nearly a dozen book-length manuscripts for ESL authors, as well, and the results have been quite remarkable.

If English isn't your first language, just drop me a line, describe your project, and we'll see how I can help make YOUR English writing dreams come true!