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English as a Second Language (ESL) Services
I can help make all of your English communications SPARKLE!
In today's competitive global marketplace, it's more important than ever
to make sure that every piece of written communication demonstrates a firm command
of the English language.
That doesn't mean the words are simply written in English. It
means those materials are written in concise, technically perfect English that
leaves no doubt about your commitment to clarity and precision. It also
demonstrates your commitment to putting forth a maximum effort to
present a professional image to the world. If English isn't your native language, I can help get your message across persuasively and powerfully.
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Here's an example of an ESL revision of an inquiry I did recently for a Chinese company.
The Original
Thanks
for your enquire. Because we have many styles and price is kind of
different,difficult for me to send what you want. However,just click
the following direct link of our quitars,you will see pictures and
price. In addtion, have a look at our products and select what you
like,then i can send you our pictures that can be displayed on website
in order to supply you convenience. You will get some free products
from us as gift sometimes. Have a consideration,please. Looking forward
to your kind response.
My Revision
Thank
you for your inquiry, but since we offer so many styles, it's difficult
to know exactly which guitar you're interested in. However, if you'll
visit our website, you'll find links to our entire line of
instruments, including pictures and price information. If you'd
like more detailed information on any particular model, we'll be happy
to send pictures of that guitar for display on your
website. You'll also receive free products from us as gifts from time
to time. We hope you'll consider our offer and look forward to
your response.
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As you can see, the revised
text dramatically improved the company's chances of receiving a
favorable response from potential clients. ESL (English as a Second Language) revisions aren't something everyone can do, so I get a lot of repeat business from clients around the world - and it's one of the most rewarding things I do. Perfect, concise, persuasive English can make a
huge impact on clients and can provide your company with a tremendous advantage in
the modern world's increasingly competitive marketplace.
The need for perfect English isn't just for businesses!
It's not just businesses that need to communicate in concise English in today's world. I've also worked with a number college students from around the world to revise term papers and essays as well as individuals from all walks of life who share one thing in common - they want to communicate their words in perfect English. Since I work full-time, I can generally have a relatively short piece of ESL work back to you within 24 HOURS!
I've also revised more than a dozen book-length manuscripts for ESL
authors and the results have been remarkable - in one case, a Norwegian author found a publisher for his book within two weeks of completion of my revisions! Don't let not speaking English as your first language stop you from reaching for your dreams. I'll be glad to help make them come true.
I've worked with writers from 26 countries around the world, so I have a wide variety of experience in turning the words of non-English speaking clients into powerful, persuasive, and perfect English. I'd love to help you, too. Send me an email and let's talk about your project!
"Have I told you how much I enjoy working with you? You're really good at this and I just sit back and smile as I read."
Liz Guevara, Separated by Dreams
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"Every time you send me a story after you've edited, when I read it, it sounds just like my own writing! If my own English was better, I'd write exactly the same way. It's almost as if you're channeling my thoughts. Thank you so much!"
Helen Chen, www.helenchen.ws
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"I love how you have rewritten
everything to be focused more on Dutch culture, where I had just a general focus
on expatriates. Great work!"
Larisa Camfferman, www.CamffermanAdvies.nl
If English isn't your native language, drop me a line, describe your project, and let's turn your goals into reality!
Email me at: abciowaga@gmail.com and let's talk!
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